Feedback from my
music magazine
- I like your double page spread, I like the image that is used, it's simple but it works. But I think that your masthead on your front cover should be bigger and you should have a consistent font or a house style. :-)
- I really like the layout of the magazine as you used the use of space well. Also the colour scheme is effective as its simple and there are not too many.
- Good photos used making the magazine look very professional, nice choice of colour scheme which makes the magazine look professional once again and nice choice of font
- I think that your contents page is the best out of three because the way the cover star is positioned suits the way the features are positioned. The fonts used in the front page are attractive and suits the genre. WELL DONE !
- I like the masthead and the actual name. The white stands out and the picture is clear and good. I like that all the cover lines are on one side, it makes the magazine look different. I like the layout on all of your pages :)
- I like your contents page, the image you use connects to your colour theme effectively. Also your double page spread looks very professional. Well done :)
- I quite like your magazine, there are some really good aspects within in there such as the mast head, the title itself is quite unique. A suggestion I would make would be to make the page numbers on in your contents page stand out from the rest of the text, other than that good job. :)
These are
all the comments I got from my music magazine. I like the outcome of my
magazine; I think I did really well. Compared to my college magazine, there is
a big difference and it shows that I have tried hard to learn many things and I
have done it successfully. Knowing I had some issues in the beginning of the year,
I have caught up on all my work and I think I have done well. One thing that I
would like to change is to put a female in my magazine because now it looks as
if my target audience is just females but it’s not.
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